One thing I'm very thankful for is my family. Many children and adults don't have family to comfort them, and I'm very lucky to have one. Having a family helps me so much with issues and other stuff. Children around the world don't get to have the feeling of love and comfort by their family, so I'm very thankful for that. Another thing I'm grateful for is my house, I get the feeling of safety. Many people around the world don't to live in a house and feel safety, these people are living on the streets, and under bridges.
Another thing I'm thankful for is an education because many children around the world don't have enough money to pay to go to school. School isn't a given, some people are killed for wanting a tuition, just like Malala Yousefzai. Something else I'm grateful for is food on my plate everyday, many people starve all around the world every day. I get to eat everyday because of my parents and I take it for granted but now I see that many children are malnourished, wanting to eat a meal so they don't pass away.
Edgar this a good blog, but there is room for improvement. You are talking about two things in each paragraph, while you should only be talking about one thing in each paragraph. But, other than that the blog is good.😀
ReplyDeleteWe did a good job on the blog. I like how you said what you were thankful for and expanded on it. I also like the comparing and contrasting with you life and other people's live like Malala who you talked about in the blog. It also didn't have any spelling or grammar errors. Good job!
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DeleteGood blog Edgar, I agree with Anthony by going back and separating your topics instead of mixing them into speerate paragraphs. Otherwise, good job.
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