Butterfly Project
I am a Jew and will be a Jew forever.
Even if I should die from hunger,
never will I submit.
I will always fight for my people,
on my honor.
I will never be ashamed of them,
I give my word.
I am proud of my people,
how dignified they are.
Even though I am suppressed,
I will always come back to life.
- Franta Bass
Hi, I think your butterfly looks amazing. I like how you have a variety of colored dots. I figured out that the red dots is like mood/tone, the blue dots for explaining why you drew what was on the butterfly, and the green dots for pictures. I saw that you explained the pictures it helped me understand. I found that you added quotes that had very good meaning. One thing that was useful was you adding the quote. I didn't really see anything bad with your butterfly so good job.
ReplyDeleteBuddy, I have this poem! Color pages did a great job. You did a great job. It does really match the poem. Although, you should've put some quotes to actually tie it with the poem.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way the butterfly looks and I think that it is not only good looking but also represents the poem well. I think that you did a great job with including images into the tags. However I feel like some of the tags didn't cover why certain parts of the butterfly where where they where. Other than that I think that it was great.
ReplyDeleteEdgar spectacular butterfly I like all the colors you added on it. Although I wish you could've added more quotes and more explanations because on some of your tags you have quotes and an explanation, but on others you just have explanations, but no quotes that's the only thing that I would add in. Other than that butterfly looks great keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteEdgar, you did a great job. You butterfly is one of the best I've seen while writing my comments. You put a lot of effort into you butterfly. It looks like you took a long time on your butterfly and I applaud you for doing that. Your Thinklink tags on the other hand are a different story. They are good don't get that wrong but you could have put some more effort into it and put some quotes from your poem, but otherwise great job.
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